= interesant | peta02 [06.Jan.03 01:19] |
Interesant..cu putine greseli gramaticale, asta din cate am reusit eu sa vad. Totusi..in prima strofa..cred ca mergea "I would have hidden". | |
= The story of my life | rozi [07.Jan.03 08:42] |
Daca nu e pura imaginatie, poezia ta ma face sa jur ca am avut de-a face cu acelasi drac . :) Cred ca "I would have run!/I would hide" merge f.f. bine.Din ce-mi aduc eu aminte.Si daca nu e corect , pacat , caci "I would hide " da ritmul si " melodia " care m-au facut sa citesc poezia pana la capat . Imi place stilul. "He took me into a dark forest of misery, shadows of anguished souls surrounded me. " Imaginea asta e vie! I like it! I could swear is the same guy! | |